New story! I always love when I get to do this, putting a new story online for you guys. This time it's one written by Brittany. You might remember her from a while back, she has shared many a story with us already. Some written on her own and also a bunch co-written with Caz. This one is all her. Have a read and let her know what you think of it!
As always, do send in your stories if you want to see them up here for others to read :)
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Title: This isn't my fairytale
Author: Brittany
Rating: 18+
Genre: R, D, SX
Pages: 22
Cast: You and two lifers.
Teaser: He needed out, he ran away and started
a new life then sad news brings him back home. What happens when he
realizes he might have made a huge mistake?
15 comments:
loved this!!!
Feeling the desperate need to kick my fave's arse BIG TIME! He's an idiot. Gladly there was the 2nd fave for some support.
Enjoyed it, Brittany :)
Oh God how sad was that?
Glad everyone is seeming to enjoy it :)
The hell is wrong with you, Shane Filan?? *bitch slaps him*
Ok, ok... I will calm down... 1... 2... 3...
What an infuriating dude... and so insecure. How dare him walk out on me like that? And then show up with a ho at the funeral... *shakes head*
I am glad I didn't take him back and actually ended up with Mark! On the opposite side, Mark was the perfect guy. *gives him a massive bear hug*
I loved the whole timeline thing... showing what I was doing and what Shane, the asshole, was doing... really good.
If there is something I would have loved to see was have Shane give a better explanation of what was the problem per se. He was kind of vague.
But you know, that's just me wanting to know, because the way it was it genuinely made me hate his character and I am sure that is what the author was after.
Good, good story. Keep it up!
You know what Kara? As I said I loved it but I have to say that whole time line was really interesting, I liked that to look at.
Haha Kara, totally agree. I also agree with your picks as Shane being #1 (the arse) and Mark as #2 (the sweetheart.) I read this and then read your comment and I was like "That Kara has read my mind!" lol
Brittany, I loved this. I actually kind of don't mind the ending, normally I'm one for a sappy, happy ending, and would have loved it to end the usual happily ever after, but after the mystery surrounding him leaving and him never actually coming clean (I need space, pfffft!) I think this ending was perfect. Keep it up! Looking forward to reading more from you! xx
this story is so... liberating, I don't know how to describe it even if it was so sad, that's true... I was feeling everything as if I was really losing the one I love...
That is one great story and I've loved it so much
Hi! I have a question. I read this story on my phone and it ended like this: "I closed my eyes and drifted back to sleep hoping I wouldn’t see Shane again". Am I missing something? I don't know if this is the end or I have a problem with the website. Please tell me because I feel like I need more of this story!
@Fer; Not a website problem, I'm afraid that's all there is.
Oh! ok... it just that I felt like something was missing... I don't know. I guess I wanted to see Shane in real pain or to know more about my new relationship with Mark ;) But I really liked this story. I hope to read more from Brittany!
I would love a sequel for this! Very good story!
sequel! sequel! sequel!
I'm working on a sequel ladies, hopefully you will be reading it soonish :)
Did everyone pick Shane as number one and Mark as second,?!?!?! I love this story although it kinda made me hate Shane. Thank you for taking the time to write this and I would love to know the name of the sequel.
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