Hey Guys!
After hours without internet - welcome to the countryside!! - I can now give you the complete historical fic. I made a little not "Part Four" for those of you who only wanna read the ending.
Again, please be aware that there will be violence in this last part. So if you can't handle rape and tortue, please stopp at this point.
Historical Challenge Noa complete
5 comments:
So is this the ending to the story?? Cause its amazing so far an amazing piece of writing you've done xx
It's a really lovely story with a nice end. :)
Oooh, it's ended already?! :o haha After the third part I did not see that coming. There was a lot of build up in that part and the fourth part seemed a bit rushed to me.
For instance, that sister that had her eyes on my man. I kinda still feel the need of slapping her lol
Overall I've enjoyed the story. I do think I need to re-read it again to fully grasp all that was happening, it was a lot to take in! haha
Eric was quite the meany, wasn't he. Good thing his throat got cut, well deserved too. Jeez, he must have traumatised quite some people for life if they even lived to tell the tale at all.
It was very courageous of Mark to go back to that horrible place to safe me. I did wish we got to look inside his head a bit more, it must have been a real struggle for him to go through. But also the way he was falling for me and the decission for him becoming a monk and then not anymore. I can fill in some of the pieces by stuff he told in the story but it would've been nice to get inside his mind a bit more if that makes any sense lol
You've deffo made an effort to put a lot of gore in there haha Had me shudder for real. It's a miracle Kian survived all that really, he must be a real strong man.
Also, it was nice to see that the meany lifer still turned out to be not that bad in the end trying to help me escape even if that failed.
>> and now I'm all inspired to go back to writing on my own historical. It's fun! teeheee!
(ps; you should add tags to this post aswell, at least your name, to make it easier to find the story when it has disappeared off the main page in a few weeks time ;))
Wow! That was intense!
Maybe I will start writing a historical as well. can I still ask for a challenge from you or can I also write my own?
I will try and read the whole fic again tonight and get all the small details. It is a great story! What I liked especially about it was the dead people that were not dead at all. I had said goodbye to my second fave and all of a sudden he turns up again! I was so sure it would be my fave on the table! That is what I really liked about it. It was not easy to foresee the next things that were about to happen.
I was also glad about the happy end even though it came a little sudden for me. But I guess it would have killed the story if you had written about them having kids or getting married. It would have enlarged the story and killed the point. Great work! I can't wait for moore historical stories to come!
Great story! cant wait for the other historical fics!
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