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We have a new story for you by Mélo and it's a great one, once again! Go have a read and leave her some love.
Monique
Title: Play for me
Author: Mélo
Rating: 18+
Genre: R, SX
Pages:7
Cast: You and your favorite 'lifer
Teaser: When it comes to playing with him, can you win?
6 comments:
Love it, talk about less is more. you didn't need names or to describe every single physical attribute it was bloody brilliant.
I already told you this, but you're a fantastic story-teller, Mélo! I totally admire your way with words, the way you manage to hit the feels not even saying all that much. I very much enjoyed this story
thanks girls , I'm glad you like it
Wow! That was fantastic! You certainly have a way with words! Brilliant, can't wait to read more and more stories from you, the ones I have read have just blown me away, keep it up!
Thanks for sharing this, Mélo!
Finally managed to read it and I have to say, I really enjoyed the way you described the whole scenery. You have a way with words, you know how to emphasize by repeating and using synonyms, using paragraphs, short and long sentences, I almost made me feel dizzy :)
Really well done, I have just been shagged pretty intensely on a piano :)
Short stories are your thing. You could make them even shorter, only give us a hint, let our minds play the rest of it itselves...
Excellent story... And funny thing while reading the piano playing part of the story "Let There Be Love" came on my play list and it made me fangirl, a lot. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
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