Saturday 6 June 2015

Bring me to life by Kara - full story

7-6
It's the final update *sad face* of Kara's story. Have fun!

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Hi all!

Guess who's back with a new story? It's Kara! And it's a long one too. 225 pages of vampire-goodness. I'm sure you're going to love this!

We're kicking off with the first chapter today. You'll find it in the link below. Over the next few weeks we'll add to the story. We'll add a message to this post when it's updated and tweet about it too (as we try to do for every update. Go check out our Twitter, you'll find a link over there >>>).

For now, enjoy the start on this. And keep checking back for more!

Monique

PS: Sorry for gearing you all up on the tag and then not posting this yesterday. I've tried and tried and tried some more but our host was being a pain all day and I couldn't get it to work till just now. Eek! 





Title: Bring me to life
Author: Kara A. Stevens
Rating: 18+
Genre: R, D, SX, F, T
Pages:225
Cast: You and three 'lifers
Teaser: He was everything she despised, everything she'd worked her entire life to destroy. Undead, immortal... a vampire. And sinfully gorgeous.
Now fate had thrown her face to face with the sexiest pair of fangs... ever! The question wasn't if she could resist him, the question was for how long...

51 comments:

Monique said...

Whoop whoop! It's up! I don't have to tell you how much I love this, you already know haha But still <3

Sophie said...

Loving this so far, so different. Its gonna be an amazing story i can tell! Amazing Start <3

Toni said...

ahhh great start!!!! im so excited to read the rest! yay

Toni said...

ooooooooooooooooo 2 chapters and it is sooo good. love where this is heading lol.

Jess said...

DYING! This is so fantastically written; the plot sucks you in from the get go and before you know it you're holding your breath as you read. So good!

kaz said...

Oh wow, this is going to be awesome! It's great already. Can't wait to read more! :)

Toni said...

hahahaha! Love the new chapter!

Sophie said...

I cant wait to see how this plans out. Gonna be one hell of an amazing story. 3 chapters in and im already hooked! x

Unknown said...

Hi guys!!

I am glad everybody seems to be enjoying my beloved Fangy Shane... although you're just getting to know him.

It was such a pleasure writing this story and this characters. It was as thrilling as it was nerve-wrecking.

I am currently working on another fic, but I have Fangy Shane withdrawals. I fell in love with these characters soo sooo much and that story was with me for so long (thanks Monique for sticking with me all this time *cyber hug*) Do come back and check out the updates because there is so much to come... I hope you bear with me, it's a huge-ass story.

Thanks for all your lovely comments...

Monique said...

Fangy Shane! <3 Really, script-checking with Fangy Mark is the oddest thing ever haha
Needless to say I'm still loving.

Tina said...

Awesome story! Can't wait for more :))

Emma said...

Absolutely in love with this story so far!

Mel said...

really loving this story! So addictive already :)

mélo said...

love this story! it's very well-written :)

ng said...

yay, you updated!!!

so far i'm reading chapter 4, then i noticed the update and i coudn't be more happier.

you really got me hooked to this story; it's so nice written and so detailed that i can image everything when i close my eyes.

really hope you keep the updates coming and won't take to mcuh time apart of them.

thank you for sharing your story;
love Always Ng

Neverland said...

@ng; Don't worry about that, Kara has finished the story and all of it is scripted and ready ;) We'll keep updating at least twice a week, if all goes to plan.

Monique said...

Karaaa! That kiss... *swoon* <3 Also, I keep chuckling while reading this story. I love the interactions between Mr. Hot Fangs and the leading lady. Love it love it love it!

Unknown said...

Hi again, guys... glad to see you all still enjoying this story.

Hahahaha Monique... yes, that kiss was something, wasn't it?

Toni said...

ahhhhhhhhhhhh

ahhhmaaahhhyyyyzing! cant wait for more!!

Monique said...

I was going to talk about how much I love this story still. How very much I enjoyed re-reading it as I do updates. How I enjoy finding new bits and pieces in between the old and how perfectly they fit. How brilliant a writer you are. And then this chapter happened....

Oh my.... *speechless*

Unknown said...

Lots of stuff happened in this story... *snickers*

Ohhhh, there a lot of typos towards the end. My OCD keeps reminding me of it.

Emma said...

oh I can not get enough of this story, looking forward to the next update already :)

Anonymous said...

I can't get enough of this story. Can't wait for more updates!

Monique said...

The telepathic connection is just <3 And yay Fangy for rooting for me in the argument with my hot slayer brother.

Also, that vampire is so freakin hot!

Anonymous said...

I love this story. Well done it's fantastic xx

Dani (Danila) said...

The vampirology of this story is way better than twilight. I love how the sweet banter goes on with me and my fangy lifer! Now I am a sucker for updates! Love this! Two thumbs up for you! Go girl! :)

Toni said...

Love the updates :)

Unknown said...

Tell me there will be a BIG update this week please? :)

Ng said...

please update soon; i'm checking this site everyday (and if i can more) to see if it's updated...

please update soon, i really need an escape my reality today and the next days.... :o(

Monique said...

Eek, sorry to have kept you all waiting... But there's an update now ;) Haha

@Kara; That 'haha' came from a tear-streaked face... :( Again. Still the meanest thing ever. Slayer-Mark is the bestest... <3 :(

Toni said...

Eeepp! great update!!! loving this story!

Emma said...

oh my last comment didn't seem to work!
love this story so much, definitely one of the best i have read recently.
last update had me a little choked up, looking forward to seeing where it does from here!

Jess said...

*lets out the breath I didn't know I was holding* Where to start with this all! I am so sorry to have it kept up with reading, but I am SO glad to have caught up.

Kara, you are freaking BRILLIANT! THIS story is how vampires should be written! The plot is so amazing, the characters are incredible and everything about it is intense yet sweet, loving, sad, compelling. There were numerous times I burst out laughing and even more times breaking down in tears. Especially that last chapter! This story is absolutely incredible.

I have always have loved your writing, but you truly have outdone yourself with one. It's going to be really sad once it's over. Haha

Jess said...

To not have kept up** lol

Kaz said...

I fell behind a bit with this one and got to read a huge big chunk of it. I seriously love this. Every update brings something else that I'm all "YES! BRILLIANT!" at. (I actually have said stuff like that to my computer, my cat thinks I'm nuts...)

This is going to be a fave for always, definitely will keep re-reading this long after it has finished being updated.

Kara, you are brilliant. Keep it up! xx

Ng said...

NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't stop here!!!!

o man; now i have to wait till it's updated; meaning twice a day.

this is really a beautifull story; got me hooked from the beginning.

please update soon; pretty please!!!

love Ng

Kara said...

Well, I feel you guys... completely.

When I finished writing this story I didn´t know what else to do. It is still on my mind all the time. Definitely one of my favorite stories to write, even if it's not on my favorite genre.

I miss Fangy Shane!

Sophie said...

Please add the final chapter, don't think i can wait much longer, it's been my favourite story thats ever been on this site. Inspired me to start writing myself now, although I don't think I'm very good & not sure if anyone would be willing to help me write it.. x

Emma said...

Oh I agree, I need the final chapter asap! So sad to see this end!

Monique said...

Fave Fave Fave Fave Fave! (Despite the fact that you're killing off my brother, bring him back to life, kill him off again and then bring him back once more... eek! haha) Here's to hoping I'll survive that vicious attack of mr. Hot Fangs

Monique said...

Final chapter... Oh Kara, Kara! Right in the feels. Even after reading it again for the umpteenth time I still tear up about this. So freakin sad :( Still, best story yet! Love your work more and more with each word you put down. Never stop!

PS; Putting all of them through the same torture you put me through. Seems only fair! Mwuahahaha

Ana said...

Oh God, that made me cry. Well done it was so well written. I have to say that although it broke my heart it was a refreshing change from 'And they all lived happily ever after'
Well done. brilliant

Toni said...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tears in my eyes! that was Amaze! Great story Kara!

Jess said...

So many tears. So sad that it had to end that way but not every story can be a happy story.....

Unless you make a sequel and have him alive and trying to fight off what Alec did to him. Haha wishful thinking.

Anyway, really loved the story and you definitely hit every emotion possible. Fantastic job!

ng said...

NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! why did you end it like this?!

ok the story was really good and well written and yes not all of them have good endings; and i understand that; but with this story, i'm dissapointed (sorry don't mean to be hard)

i really wanted/ hoped they'd get the society down and live somewhere else with a new identety(?)...

sigh....

Kara said...

Hi guys!

Monique don't be mean... you know what you have to do!

Like you guys say not all the stories can end in a happy ending... or can they?

I am so, so, so, so glad (and a bit sorry LOL) that you all have enjoyed BMTL and have stuck around to get through that ending. It was heart-wrenching having to write it, I kid you not. This story was a daunting challenge from beginning to end, it took me like six months to write it.

I read someone has been inspired by this fic to go on and write her own fics... *scrolls up furiously* Hi Sophie!!!! That is the best compliment I have ever received, really.

And... yes, Monique is evil. you will see... hahahaha... but, you know what? I did the same thing to her, poor thing.

Don't be too sad about Fangy Shane's demise... I know I am not *wink*.

Monique said...

@Kara; Six months? You wish girl haha You've kept me waiting much much longer than that :p hahaha

Okay, I'll stop being mean. Surprise coming right up!

kaz said...

BLOODY HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (pun not intended.) What a freakin ride that was! I loved loved LOVED it. Thank you for sharing it, Kara, you are awesome!!

I have no words. none. Just...... yeah none.

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Nadia said...

Loved it. Loved it. LOVED IT.

You have a way with words, girl!! I was hooked from the very beginning and I simply couldn't go to bed because I couldn't turn my laptop off without finishing reading this story first. I ended up going to be at 5AM and spent all of today wondering how on Earth did it all finish! LOL Can't wait to read the sequel, the excerpt was just amazing!! :D

Unknown said...

I ended up in tears... Seriously blabbing like a baby... Because I'm a citizen of Denial City o would like to pretend that my lover vampire is alive and well somewhere and that my Slayer brother is lying to me so I can move on with my life. Thank you for taking the time to write this.

Anonymous said...

Must say I'm a #FangyShane fan. I loved him more than i love my ex. And that's quite a lot. I cannot finished yet because of the browsing, but until now... My lord! Kinda hot, kinda rough, kinda romance and kinda sexy Shane. 😍😍😍😍 #Congratulations I'll be waiting for the second part.