Sunday, 23 December 2012

Christmas Story: What I Want For Christmas; by Gemini

Here's another Christmas fic! Enjoy!


Title: WHAT I WANT FOR CHRISTMAS
Author: Gemini
Rating: 14+
Genre: R
Cast: You, your lifer
Words: 2670

5 comments:

Gemini said...

OMG that was so fast !!

i just want to say i'm sorry for any language mistakes , English not my first language !!

and i know the story can be better but i was stuck with the idea and how to improve it .

so thanks for reading anyway :)

beck_willis said...

It wasn't too hard to read considering English is not your first language, you did a good job. I was a bit confused about the Guinea pig part though lol
Nice little fic, well done and keep writing

Monique said...

Agree with Bex, seeing as English isn't your first language I think you did a good job! Keep up the writing and reading and your English will only improve :)

Was a lovely little story, well done!

Gemini said...

@Monique & @Bex thank you , it really make my confidence high that you like the story , i tried my best , thanks again :)

Dora said...

I also think you did a good job given that English is not your first language. I liked the idea :)