Thursday 4 October 2012

Fiction: Close Your Eyes - by Bex

Hey peeps,
sorry that we didn't give you a story update sooner. But here's a story by Bex now. Enjoy and leave comments!




Title: CLOSE YOUR EYES
Author: Bex
Genre: R,D
Rating: G
Cast: You and 1 lifer
Teaser: He has to leave but he has a solution for when she's missing him.

SongFic: Westlife - Close Your Eyes

8 comments:

Anne-marie said...

OH!! Tell me there is a sequel to this.. I did enjoy it and didn't expect that end... Great writting as always

x Anne

alwaysinatrance said...

Hey Bex.. Great cliff hanger there! :p like Anne-marie, I hope there's a sequel too.. oh well as always the story is great! :)

beck_willis said...

I haven't written a sequel but ya never know.

Thanks for the comments guys

steffi said...

but if there's a sequel, he'll live and I think the story looses quality, when you know at the end whether he survives or not. Nice one, Bex! :) And that doesn't mean that I don't want to have a sequel, just my opinion :)

beck_willis said...

No i agree steffi, I think the cliffhanger ending is sometimes much more powerful than knowing what happens, whether its a happy or sad ending

Erin said...

Very emotional story! I as well hope there is a sequel at some point :)

Monique said...

Why have I not commented on this before?! Well, I have, but not on here anyways :p haha

I love it Bex, really strong writing and an unexpected sad ending :(

Unknown said...

Hi I read this the other night and it's brilliant.