Saturday, 18 January 2014

Shadows by Kara - complete

Time for the last update! The whole fic is now up. Enjoy the read and leave Kara a comment when you've finished ;)



Title:  Shadows
Author: Kara A. Stevens
Rating: 18+
Genre: R,D,SX
Pages: 205
Cast: You, your best friend, four lifers and some more
Teaser:  
She was no enchanted princess and this was no fairy tale, so what was she doing dancing with Prince Charming at the ball?
Soon after she would learn that this particular Prince Charming’s castle had so long being cursed with darkness and never-ending sorrow… and most importantly, she would also discover that her one magical night with her prince didn’t necessarily end when the clock struck midnight…

50 comments:

Sam said...

Hello there.

Unfortunately when i click on the link it takes me to a page which says 'Sorry this page can not be found.'

Anonymous said...

Hi ditto sorry

Neverland said...

Hm... I checked, it should work now, have a look

Unknown said...

Hey :)

I've read chapter 1, but when I click on chapter 2 or 3 or whatever It does not work :/

Neverland said...

it will work within the next days. We will make daily updates like an advent calender

Anonymous said...

I love this story! has "I get weak!" been taken down? says page not found :(

Vicksta1982 said...

Uh oh....*from the latest update* LOL. Now what...??? hehehe let's wait and see!

Monique said...

'I get weak' isn't working for me either, girls. It gives a page saying the original page is no longer there...

Teeeheeee! Shadows is up! Re-read, re-read! I need to free some of my schedule later today to get it read! haha

Anonymous said...

Wow cant wait for the next part

Vicksta1982 said...

The Period Tracker link made me laugh! hahaha

Toni said...

ohh getting good! cant wait for more haha

Raine Rafael said...

Wait, can someone give me the link to Chapter 1?

Monique said...

Raine, if you open the link to 'chapter 5', everything up to there should be in there

Unknown said...

Oooh got it! Thanks. Love it so much! When does this get updated? :) - Raine

Unknown said...

I actually have The Period Tracker app (the thing is just too cute!) so I can just imagine the character's dilemma wen she saw that little ovulation flower! Hahahaha!

Anonymous said...

Wow cant wait for the next update. Hope its not long for chapter ten n eleven cant get enough.x

Monique said...

It's too late, darling, it's too late. Mwuahahahaha

Yes, still enjoying this immensely! Can't help myself. Thanks Kara!

And Noa, thanks for still updating! ;) Good luck with the arrival of the baby!

Kara said...

Babies and more babies hahahahahaha

I'm glad everybody is having fun... now I wished I added some Xmas scene to this fic... it would have been so perfect lol

Good luck with the baby, Noa... I hope it all goes well and I shall be thinking of you both and the keeping you in my prayers so this Neverland baby comes healthy and has a safe arrival.

Oh and mwahahahaha there is still a lot to come in this story...

Monique said...

Awww, I think this was one of my favorite chapters. Baby Daisy! haha Yaaay! I feel for me, for the girl. It must be so painful to watch that scene unfold, the happy parents, the excited family and then knowing that it'll be so much different for my/her own day.

And Mark! You son of a bitch. You ARE doing it all on purpose, aren't you? Too cute!

Love love!

And Noa; the baby can't stay in there forever right? :p haha It loves being with its mummy ;) Might even be a little Christmas miracle the way it's hanging on lol

Anonymous said...

Know its a long shot bit any up dates befote tomorrow? I know that it's Christmas eve but cant stop thinking about the story n need something to cheer up my christmas lol

Fer said...

Oh God! Where's chapter 12???? Can't wait to found out what's next!!

Lullu said...

Cannot wait for next chapter love this story

Lullu said...

Chapter 13 is perfect and Makes mé hunger for more. Love it Kara

Monique said...

Mark, you're a jerk! A gorgeous, handsome, delicious jerk.

Yeah, still loving! haha

Kara said...

Hi Monique!

Oh, I'll be sure to let Mark know of your outstanding work hahahaha

You are one heck of a trooper!

Yay! Shadows is alive and kicking... still more to come! Teehee!

Fer said...

"God bless you Mark Feehily" (yeah, my fav is Mark)... I loved that line!
So happy for this update! Great story!

I hope to read chapter 13 soon!

Fer said...

Oh!! Chapter 13 is ready! Now I'm NOT going to sleep!! ;)

Anonymous said...

You do that, Kara haha I'm actually waiting for him to come on Twitter and do some sort of vampire related tweet... You not feeding him Fangy Shane's yet? :p

Monique said...

...and yeah, I did just forget to put my name *eyeroll*

Javi said...

Wow! great story!! Very well written!
Can't wait for chapter 15

Kara said...

Bwahahahah I was feeling the same way, Monique. Mark is likely to surprise us anyday with his silly, funny, weird tweets that we love. :)

I have a bit of sad news... Fangy Shane is on hiatus for the time being... I am taking a holiday break, now that the holidays are over haha... although the story keeps on going in my head like a movie it seems. Every day I come up with new stuff, so I kind of have a big idea of how I want it to go. I managed to write down the parts that I like a lot, but I don't see it being finished until mid February.

In the meantime I think I also have the premise for another fic (brand new), but there is a very old fic that I have unfinished and I want to finish that one after I do Fangy Shane. I also have my historical pending. *sigh*

Ughhh so many stories in my head right now... and so very little time hahaha.

In the meantime, I am enjoying re-reading Shadows with you guys and smiling with my favorite parts.

Monique said...

*sad face*

I should pack up and move into your head really.

Sooo... *grabs calendar* How many days till mid Feb? :p



Monique said...

Aaargh! This update leaves me so conflicted! I want to hug Mark close to comfort him and at the same time kick his arse! Bastard!

I think 'me' did the right thing though... He needs to give his all or not get any at all... Girlpower! But at the same time it's all so very sad.

*deep sigh*

Kazzy Bee said...

Oh. My GOD!!!

I'm late to this party but man, it's worth it! So worth it! Kara, you are incredible, dammit, such an amazing writer, I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Agree with Monique though. I think "me" did the right thing and I'm torn between kicking Shane (for me) in the nuts and giving him a hug.

Gah.

More please!!!! :)

Jess said...

Unbelievable! Just when you think your heart can't break anymore there goes another rip as soon as something new happens. Mark needs to get his act together before it is way too late!

Fer said...

Round of applause for 'me'... the real me would have done it ages ago... but I understand how hard could be the situation having a man like Mark living with you! ;)

I loved this chapter, it breaks my heart... in a good way!

Lullu said...

Please PLEASE ADD the next chapter soon chap 15 was amazing so well written xxx

Toni said...

Waa Great update. bout time there were some talking hahahaha!
Cant wait for more!!!!

Anonymous said...

I love this fan fiction! please add the next chapeter!

Anonymous said...

Where's chapter 16???
Arrrgg!

Such a good story!

Fer said...

Yeah! Finally! I'm so happy that he's finally weeking up!
I'm just worrying about something... please if the baby is a girl... don't name her Gwen! :D

Fer said...

P.S: sorry if I made a mistake before... I'm still learning English!

Lullu said...

Last chapter PLEASE cannot wait love this story so much even he's a Pro in Breaking hearts

Anonymous said...

I loved this chapter but I keep feeling like something is missing... sometimes I feel like he's doing all this because he feels lonely... I need something that prove me that he left Gwen in the past

Kajsa said...

I utterly love this vic! Every time there's an update I read it too fast and then I have to wait for the next one :( Keep up the good work Kara!

Kajsa said...

fic*

Monique said...

Fuuuu.... Yeah, that. Typing like a massive message with all quotes and stuff and then somehow deleting it all with one move...

So, starting all over again.

Kaaara! I still love this so very very very very very much. I can't help it, every time I open this up I'm grinning like mad. I love Mark's struggle, I feel for him, I hate him and I love him all at the same time.

And this;
"I’ve loved you for so damn long and I didn’t want to. I fought it. But some things just are meant to be and one of those things is my love for you."

Perrrfect!

I'm glad Mark finally got his act together. He deserves the love, deserves the happiness. And they make such a lovely couple.
*deep sigh*

Like seriously... No words.

More more more more more!

Jess said...

ABSOLUTELY amazing end to one of the most well written stories ever! Ms. Kara, you yet again have captured your audience from beginning to end, leave them wanting more even when all is said and done.

Your talent is just incredible and I am so looking forward to anything you have coming out in the future.

Well done!

Stacy said...

Again, I spent hours upon hours reading this, as I did with I Get Weak. You are a fic genius. Can't wait to read something new from you. Absolutely fantastic job!

Monique said...

Had a massive re-read last night. It's still as awesome as ever, it still teared me up and it's still hot!
Kara, my little genius, I need more of your writing in my life. It's been too long. I'm going to haunt you now, of that I'm certain!

Also, today's going to be one sleepy day. Late night reads are the best, early morning afters; not so much! haha