A little update for the new week, enjoy Kara's new fic!!
Kara, the stage is yours
Title: I'll say it in a lovesong
Author: Kara A. Stevens
Rating: 18+
Genre: R, SX
Pages: 64
Cast: You, your best friend and four lifers
Teaser: Destiny, just like love knows no rhyme or reason. Both know what they want, and do as they please most of the time. So when is it time to stop fighting love and giving into that marvelous sensation? Your head tells you a lot of sensible, smart things, but your heart usually has different ideas... When is it time to admit the inevitable? You're meant to be!
13 comments:
OMG Kara! I'm so thrilled you were the one who got the excerpt I submitted. Thank you for bringing my "unfinished story" to life! Great job on the whole story line! Awesome!!! ☺
I've adored reading this story, adored scripting it and then adored reading it all over again from the beginning <3
The predestined lovers feel was just so very cute (and hot!) and I loved how they just leveled at some out of this world point and how that made the lifer break up at first. But in the end there's just no escaping the bond they have between them and I'm so very glad that he realizes that aswell!
I'm a BIG fan of yours Kara (Ha, you never saw that coming, did ya? :p) and you work your way into my heart a little more with every word you write. Keep them coming!
good god girl this is amazing :) I can't stop reading! I love your phrasing and the little bits of humor you always manage to bring into the story :) I read it and every now and then I just smile, because I think something's cute or "so typical" or just absolutely hilarious (because I've reacted exactly like that before ;) ) and oh my is this hot! Way to go Kara, I'm definitely a big fan of your work!
Loved it Kara thank u for One more brilliant story xxx
Hi guys!
I just wanted to say thanks for all your comments!
@Raine -- I am glad that I got your excerpt, believe me. It was just so perfect for the story. I mean, a man who breaks up with his girlfriend over the phone? It made my blood boil when I first read it. I knew the story that accompanied this beginning had to live up to it and have some intense feelings involved. I want to believe I did it justice.
@Monique... *virtual hug* Thanks for all you do! The scripting, the graphics... I still stare at that close up of Shane's face... it's just soooooo... *struggles to find the word*... steamy!!!!
The work is still coming, don't worry... right now I'm in the middle of some intense stuff with another fic. *evil laugh*
@Claire... hi! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I always say it, I enjoy writing these stories... and if I make you guys smile and laugh out loud, as well as feel strong emotions, then I enjoy them even more!
@Lullu... you're welcome! My 4th fic has already been sent and should be up soon... so stay tuned!
I like the story but I personally felt it was dragged out a bit too long with a lot of meaningless back and fourth between the characters. The changes of views and thoughts got me lost a few times and took away some of the essence of the story.
This does not mean anything bad against the idea and concept of the story or the way it was written as I think those areas are fine.
Just my little two cents worth.
Just wanted to say I absolutely adored this story from start to finish! What I wouldn't give for a connection with someone like that (especially Shane who I chose as my favourite haha)! Well done Kara you are an amazing writer & this story proves it even more, well done girl! :) x x
Loved it! you're the best Kara <3 stayed up late to read it hahaha
Fantastic story, the sexual tension when they first see each others oozes from the screen. I loved the idea of them being soul mates and somehow connected. Loved reading this, can't wait for more. You never disappoint
First of all, I'm sorry it took me so long to get around to this. Per usual lately every time I sit down SOMEONE needs me. A three yr old, a dog, a man who thinks I'm his mother too. LOL They just don't understand sometimes I need to pretend Shane thinks I'm sexy and says sweet and naughty things to me. And like Bex said, you never disappoint.
Its so strange because I was actually toying with the idea of past lives and I think I remember seeing something about that in here and was like, ah! She read my mind! We're connected...oooo.
Speaking of connections, hot...damn...Kara. You have a way with certain *cough* scenes. And frankly, I'm a little jealous. I can't write them but I do enjoy reading them so thank you.
I can't wait to see what you come up with for the history challenge. The bit of supernatural and mythology you threw in was good and I think you could take a little more and run with it. Like I've said before I'm a sucker for some fantasy!
OH btw, my son's father's name is Andrew so that was little...awkward haha. Every time he would pop up I'd picture him but they were totally different so phew. My Andy would have lost his shit LOL. Anywhos...great story!
@Vicksta1982: I'm sorry you thought the story dragged... my advice is do not read my upcoming fics they are like triple as long as this one LOL But I get what you said about the first person / third person flip. I wanted to write it first person, as I always do, but I felt I needed the male character's perspective or it wouldn't have worked out. I'm used to writing first person... and I feel I'm making the transition to 3rd person slowly so I'm still working on it.
@Nicola: I also had Shane in mind, so yeah I get what you said... *snickers* that was just me and my imagination running wild.
@Toni: Hope you didn't lose a lot of sleep because of me... lol... I'm glad you enjoyed it.
@Beck: Sexual tension hahaha... yes! I had fun with that a lot while writing. At first I thought of not letting them be together at the end, but I didn't have the heart to do it. I'm a hopeless romantic.
@Bailey... we're all connected somehow, I believe. We spend our share of time reading each other, so it's no wonder we sometimes think alike.
As for the "scenes" you're referring to... Mwahaha... what can I say? They just come to me. Blame it on Shane!
I am writing the historical to be as historically accurate as possible... I have completed the research already. So if anyone needs 1300s stuff, ask me.
I do have a pending vampire fic. I have it in my mind already, have half of it in an outline.
I'm glad with all your comments and feedback... I'm taking it all in and applying it to my upcoming stories.
So thanks for commenting!
Honestly, I consider myself a bit of a fanfiction snob, if you will. I rarely find myself enjoying a fic without finding something in it that makes me literally smack my hand against my forehead, but this was brilliant. I was in it from the very beginning. Job very well done. So glad they fixed the scripting so I could read it today!
Oh, and a vampire fic? Yes, please! My sister and I once teamed up on a Westlife vampire fic, but we never got around to finishing it. I'd love to read an interactive story about Shane sinking his teeth into me ;)
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