Friday, 17 May 2013

A little Help for Sarah...

Hey peeps!

We only resceived an email of a writer -Sarah- and she needs some help with her fic...
Sarah asked if someone wants to co-write her fic, she has a starter and an idea, actually the main girl should fall for Shane and be with him, but she wants her to also start an affair with Nicky.... it is a reunion-story.
Who is in the mood to think, join, discuss and co-write a little?

This is her Starter




Sarah sat in her local Starbucks, having a latte while waiting for her friend Joeys Arrival. They have been friends since school so they are very close. They had a full day planned shopping, dinner, drinking then a school reunion on the night. She received a text off Joey (going to be late babe not be long though xx) “great like always” she thought to herself. Before she put her IPhone back on the table she heard two familiar voices at the counter. She tried to hide herself by covering her face with her hair.
Nicky was ordering his coffee while flirting with the waitress, Shane dropped his mobile on the floor “great” while he picked his phone up he looked up to those sea blue eyes, their eyes stayed in a lock until Nicky shouted of him. “Shannnneee”  “whhhhaatttt man” Nicky looked at what Shane was looking at.
“Aaaahhh I see it man!”
“Nothing to see honestly Nicky”
“Is that Sarah Thirlaway?”  “Yeah it is”
They grabbed their coffee and walked over to Sarah, she didn’t know where to look.
“Well if it isn’t you Sarah!” Nicky said with a smile on his face.
“Hey Nicky, hi Shane, “what brings you back in these woods, the most famous guys in the world?”
The lads went to take their seats Shane sat on one side of Sarah and Nicky on the other. Shane never said much as he couldn’t stop looking at her, he felt the same about her as he did in school.



Flash back
Sarah and Shane dated for the last couple of years of high school, they were so close, and everyone voted them the cutest couple for the year book. Soon as Shane started to get famous that’s when everything changed for them, Sarah couldn’t handle the fame and being in the papers all the time. Shane wanted her by his side all the way through his career. She couldn’t make him choose so she finished him it was for the best at the time.

Back to present
“You here for the big school reunion then?” Sarah said trying to look at Shane.
“Of course wouldn’t miss it, you going?” Shane said?”
“Yes I and Joey are going.”
“Joeeey? As in Joey Evans? Nicky asked curiously with his arms folded over!
“Yes she’s on her way so il have to meet her, here’s my number Shane okay give me a ring?”
Shane looked disappointed when Sarah walked away from him again, now he saw her finally he wanted to fight for her to have her back in his life.
He grabbed her hand, “Shane I really have to go!”
“I’ll meet you tonight okay?”
“Okay sees you then!”
Sarah walked out of the café to meet Joey, she was thinking to herself how can she explain what she just went through.

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now we need your help :)
Cheers, Noa and Steffi with Sarah  

6 comments:

Unknown said...
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Unknown said...

Sorry, I sould a bit drunk in my previous comment... DELETE!

Hold it... the main character is in love / dated shane but she also wants to have an affair with nicky?

Not that I wouldn't like being a part of that particular man-sandwich, but isn't a bit contradictory? This is a reunion-story after all. Isn't she getting reunited with Shane?

Nicky sounded interested in the best friend... I would make that a small, funny little side-story

Neverland said...

hm... the reunion with Shane might be too obvious...
I am more into Nicky, maybe there's a chance for some conflicts, twists and turns there - fights between the guys (what happens to westlife when they fall for the same girl? Shane has the claim, but they broke up, so it might be nickys turn?), maybe someone gets drunk that night, confesses, a fight on the reunion party maybe?
I am not sure :)I would pick Nicky and turn it all around, the girl fights with her old feelings and tries to deny the new ones.... she doesnt want the guys to fight about her but she cant escape her feelings...

just some random ideas in between, I will get back to that :)
Noa

mrs filan said...

hi thanks for your ideas, has anyone got msn messenger for a little co writing perharps?
thanks sarah x

Unknown said...

i just use my karastevensfics email at gmail.

i am super busy wrapping up my new fic... and i was thinking of taking the weekend off before starting the historical.

I could help you out some, I guess.

mrs s filan said...

Hiya yer that wld be brilliant ta do u want my email address?? X