We have a new author to welcome: Zaries!
Read and enjoy!!
And of course don't forget to give her some feedback on her fic!
As far as I can tell, this is gonna be the last valentine's fic of the year ;)
Title: You're my Valentine
Author: Zaries
Rating: All
Genre: R
Pages: 10
Cast: You and your fave lifer
Teaser: Sometimes a new relationship can go beyond expected
6 comments:
Welcome to Neverland, Zaries :) I've read the fic while scripting and it's an enjoyable story. Keep up the writing and I'm sure that in time you'll grow as an author! Good luck!
I enjoyed reading it and welcome to Neverland too!
Welcome Zaries and thanks for sharing your story here with us on Neverland.
I enjoyed reading it as well and think that it's a really good first feel-good Neverland fic!
But nevertheless I noticed something:
You switched times very often, for example you started with present tense, but switch in the same sentence to past tense and so on, and you keep that up during the whole story. It's not that bad, your story is still good to read, but maybe you could keep that in mind and concentrate on that when writing your next story?
I really hope to hear more from you! :)
Lovely story!
Good job, Zaries. Hope to hear more from you. Keep writing
well done on the story
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