What a lovely story! I really liked the theme of the bet! I only find a bit too fast the way she forgives him after she had run away after hearing him talk about the bet. I would have liked a little more of contrast between them and most of all a longer description of her feelings. Bt this is just a detail! ;) Really enjoyed reading your story!
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Spotted a few scripting errors but still a very enjoyable fic. Loved the story line and glad that it all worked out in the end for them both.
What a lovely story! I really liked the theme of the bet! I only find a bit too fast the way she forgives him after she had run away after hearing him talk about the bet. I would have liked a little more of contrast between them and most of all a longer description of her feelings. Bt this is just a detail! ;) Really enjoyed reading your story!
I will write the sequel that will have a lot of problems after all it's quite impossible to plan a wed in a month ;)
Cute story! :D
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