Title: PARADISE LOST
Author: Bex
Genre: AU, D, SX
Rating: 18+
Cast: You, four lifers
Teaser: After finding out he's slipped back into his criminal tendencies, she knows it's only a matter of time before he's found and taken away from her.
Friday 21 September 2012
CONTEST: Story B - Paradise Lost by Bex
And here's the second story of the Contest. Read, enjoy, leave comments and make a decision, which one of these stories you like best! Voting starts later :)
Title: PARADISE LOST
Author: Bex
Genre: AU, D, SX
Rating: 18+
Cast: You, four lifers
Teaser: After finding out he's slipped back into his criminal tendencies, she knows it's only a matter of time before he's found and taken away from her.
Title: PARADISE LOST
Author: Bex
Genre: AU, D, SX
Rating: 18+
Cast: You, four lifers
Teaser: After finding out he's slipped back into his criminal tendencies, she knows it's only a matter of time before he's found and taken away from her.
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6 comments:
I really like the idea of a gangster-couple :) That's cool!
And he's really cute, not able to be a good boy and stay out of a criminal affair. How's the story of them going on? Will there be a sequel? :)
Somehow this story gives me a feeling, that it could probably go wrong and the police might catch him after all, but I like the uncertainty of that...
Oh I did like this it was so nice with the constant looking over your shoulder and worrying about being caught. Very well done, really good story
lovely fic, i like it and well written too
Suuuch a bad boy he is <3 Love it! ha!
Despite being such a bad boy you can just feel the love dripping of this story which kinda makes up for his criminal activities.
Ah yeah, I really love it Bex!
Gonna be a tough one, voting for a winning story. Eep!
Thanks for the comments, much appreciated!
And yes I've thought about a sequel ;)
I have to agree with Monique about feeling the love dripping from the story, but I loved that about it! I also love how he's got this bad boy side, but he adores me sooo much! I also loved how they ran together instead of being seperated, true committment! I liked seeing that they were able to stay together even if it meant changing their lifestyle a bit :)
Very well written as well! Great story all around. :) A sequel would be fantastic!
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