Monday, 2 January 2012

Fiction: Two Broken For Love - by Bex



Winner Contest Season VIII

Author: Bex
Rating: 18+
Genre: R,D,V,SX
Pages: 198
Cast: You, Kian, Shane, Nicky and Mark
Teaser: They've both suffered heartache, both swearing to never love again. A chance meeting leads to a different type of relationship forming. Will they ever be able to open their, once broken, hearts again?

16 comments:

Milo said...

Ahhhhhhhhhh that was brilliant! took me all day to read (between dealing with the kid) awesome writing!!

steffi said...

And me half of the night :) This story is really good! and I liked her drinking game

Zay said...

Amazingly amazing i just wish if u guys could script it so we can put our fave members name instead of kian :) well dine amazing

beck_willis said...

Thanks for the feedback guys, the only reason I made it a Kian fic was that i wrote it about Kian and I didn't the personality would come across if it were Nicky instead for example...

katy said...

Loved this fic great work bex in fact i love all you fic's hope theres a second one to it.amazing work bex keep it up xXx

beck_willis said...

Oooh not even give any thought to a sequel but ya never know ;)

alwaysinatrance said...

I agree with what Zay said, but nevertheless the story is fantastic!! :D keep it up!! :D

Kylie said...

Awesome story! I loved it :) Great job x

Mia said...

This is brilliant. Love the story line & how it's worded! ;) Hope to get more stories brilliantly written like this. 5 stars! x

beck_willis said...

Thanks for the feedback guys, promise the next challenge will be scripted for any Lifer ;)

Monique said...

I've absolutely loved reading this! As I told you already on twitter, loved the 'Coyote Ugly' feel it has to it. At times I really wanted to give Kian a good kick up the ... Ugh, it was just so obvious he felt more that he'd let on only it took him so long to reallise... Men! *rolls eyes* lol
Great work, Bex! It's gonna stay on my ereader so I can re-read some time ;)

beck_willis said...

Thanks Monique, I actually loved writing this one, it seemed to just write itself

Sarah said...

Same here! I loved reading it and recommanded it to a friend of mine, who can hardly wait to read it but has to since exams are coming up :D Keep writing ;) Xx

beck_willis said...

Darn exams get in the way of all the good stuff lol

Marie said...

I hate that I love it. I keep on reading it again and again. lol superb story Bex! Keep it up! :)

I'm a Shane fan, so I wrote Jodi's name instead and imagined it to be them. It's crazyyy!! <3

Natalie said...

This is definitely one of my favourite fics!! Not just a great storyline but written brilliantly too, can't wait to read it again!!