the final part of the story is up now!
Enjoy reading and please, leave a comment and rate when you have finished to let the girls know what you think about their story!
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Title: SAY YOU, SAY ME (SAY IT FOR ALWAYS)
Authors: Sarah&Sofie
Rating: 16+
Genre: R, C, A, TN
Pages: 275
Cast: You, your best friend, four lifers
22 comments:
Love the start girls! Love the flirting and teasing but can't wait for things to heat up a bit!
Loved the start,can't wait for more! The only problem I had was with the scripting and the names of the lifers suddenly switched and me being a belgian in the story. Just to let you guys know;)
Hi girls, thanks for the feedback! It means a lot to us.
Sorry, to hear the scripting didn't go as planned - though if it may be a comfort, being a Belgian isn't all that bad :D, I promise - but I do hope it will work properly next time! ;) Xx
I love Belgian chocolate,if that's any comfort:p But when me and my best friend travel from Norway in the story,and then turn out to be belgian it just doesn't make sense. Lookin forward the next part :-D
Great start girls, looking forward to the next part, i noticed a few scripting errors too but it wasn't that bad
Oh this little road and field trip sounds like it's gonna be fun! Hope the night goes well for all of us :)
Those boys are such naughy scheming things! But so sweet at the same time! It seems they've met their match in us girls though. Can't wait to see how the rest of this night goes...the couples need time alone! ;)
I love this story girls:) Now that the scripting is better,I find it easier to read it.I know how hard scripting is,but sometimes it's difficult to make sense when the stories doesn't make sense ;)
But it really is a great written story,it reminds me of my teenage years:)
Thank you ladies, for the lovely comments! ;)
Yeah, I know what you mean. Scripting is a tricky thing, but I'm already happy that they invented it cuz it makes a story sooo much more interesting, don't you think :D
Lol, I can only wish for my teenage years to have been that adventurous :p
Hope you will enjoy the updates too... Xx
None of the names etc will load for me? anyone else having this prob?
i am having the same problem Milo.
oh damn! I really don't know why the heck that stupid script isn't working!! Sorry, but that pisses me off! Yesterday, right before I uploaded it on our server, it worked without any problems. AAH!
Sorry girls. Give us some time, I try to fix this asap, alright?
I really like the adventure the characters are on in this story, I like the little mystery they're working on solving.
OMG,I totally love this story!!It's so sweet and naughty at the same time:) Can't wait for the next update :)
I love this story can't wait to read more about this mystery they're working on solving and the characters. this story is just amazing its like a book that you can't put down till you have finished every last word.
Thx you girls for the lovely comments!! Means a lot to us... hope you will enjoy the end just as much when it's uploaded ;) Take care sweethearts Xx
Really enjoying this, but i think it would read better as an original Lifer story, mainly cause you've managed to capture each of their personalities so well
I enjoyed your story girls but for me it was too wordy, it was like there were parts that just didn't need to be in there. The prom scene was great, very romantic and I love how a year later they were still going strong. Loved the romance and the mystery. :)Good job, keep writing!
Enjoyed it so much! Really enjoyed the reading :) I got lost in the two poems you made. They are so lovely, and nearly made me cry. Can I share them with my friend? I will of course credit you for them. I will not take the credit for them myself, as you made them :) x
Hi 'Anonymous'
You can defenitely share mine if you like, don't know about Sofie's, she'll have to answer that herself ;)
Glad you enjoyed! And thank you for your sweet comment.
Big kiss, Sarah Xx
Hi Sarah,
Wow thank you so much. I'm so glad you let me share it. Just want everyone to see it, it's so beautiful :)Big kiss right back at ya, Annette xx
Hi Anonymous!
Thank you for you comment :)
You can share my poem as well ;)
Big kiss,
Sofie
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