Just noticed a scripting error on the main lifers nickname...whoopsie!
Only "Alright Ki?"? Or elsewhere too? I just noticed that..
And it looks like I've missed an eye colour.."She nodded her head as she stared into his blue eyes" Everything else looks ok, sorry to be a pain lol
Apart from the lil whoopsies lol, awesome fic love it!! No-ones perfect bex xxxx
Aww love it! Cute little story with a twist. Can't believe we haven't been caught out my anyone yet, we must be good at this game ;)
So good couldn't belevie Kian was that very cheeky and keeping it away from Shane Filan naughty boy! Hehe. Well done Bex-Fran
Loved :)
Nice story BEx!
haha nice story :D
Love it Bex, but you already knew that x10 :p lol Love how we're secretly sneaking around <3 Not been very good at my job as 'script-checker' then :o Eep! I blame Mark for having the same eye-color as Kian *inserts 'I-still-love-Mark' smily*
Thanks for all the lovely comments, much appreciated :D
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Just noticed a scripting error on the main lifers nickname...whoopsie!
Only "Alright Ki?"? Or elsewhere too? I just noticed that..
And it looks like I've missed an eye colour.."She nodded her head as she stared into his blue eyes"
Everything else looks ok, sorry to be a pain lol
Apart from the lil whoopsies lol, awesome fic love it!! No-ones perfect bex xxxx
Aww love it! Cute little story with a twist. Can't believe we haven't been caught out my anyone yet, we must be good at this game ;)
So good couldn't belevie Kian was that very cheeky and keeping it away from Shane Filan naughty boy! Hehe. Well done Bex-Fran
Loved :)
Nice story BEx!
haha nice story :D
Love it Bex, but you already knew that x10 :p lol Love how we're secretly sneaking around <3
Not been very good at my job as 'script-checker' then :o Eep! I blame Mark for having the same eye-color as Kian *inserts 'I-still-love-Mark' smily*
Thanks for all the lovely comments, much appreciated :D
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