Tuesday, 30 October 2012

BUUUAAAAH!! Halloween Fic No 1

Hey everyone,

here's the first of the countless Halloween Challenge stories that were sent in by you!
Have fun and keep on commenting! 




Title: UNVEILED
Author: Monique
Rating: 13+
Genre: R
Pages: 8
Cast: You, a friend, 4 lifers
Teaser: Forced to go out on a blind date at Halloween, you run into an old sweetheart. But will he still recognize you?

Note: This story is scripted to add any lifer but it's taking place in Sligo. If it bothers you to read about Nicky living in Sligo, don't make him your fave or second fave lifer.

Challenge stuff:
place = cave
stuff = key
costume = genie in a bottle
animal = rat
drink = tequila

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

That was really good :)

Gemini said...
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Gemini said...

One Word "" Awesome " .

beck_willis said...

I knew this was gonna be good just by reading the teaser and I wasn't disappointed.
This is what a great fic looks like!

Loved the story line, made me laugh a few times and the ending was so sweet. Not sure mine's as good as this one haha

Great Job as usual Monique!

steffi said...

Ah, Monique, I love it! Good job! :)

Trish said...

This was a great story, Monique! Loved it! :D

Xeeni said...

Very nice story...the genie costume sounds nice as well ;)

Delossen said...

Looooooooooooved

Erin said...

Loved it Monique! I loved the little game she played with him,m loved the teasing from the guys and so happy he figured it out in the end! They deserve to be happy now that they've found each other again.

Savannah said...

love it! another great ome frm u, Monique!

Fran Wood said...

Opps sorry I forgot to put my name that's probably why it was deleted! Anyway very well written liked the story :)

Monique said...

Eeek, so many comments :D Cuddles all around. Thank you all so much for your lovely words! I'm glad you've all enjoyed it, I had fun writing it so yeah, all good! haha Love you all!

Can't wait to read the other Halloween-themed fic(s) :p ;)

Lucia said...

It's so sweet that they found that they are in love after so many years! Well done, Monique!

Bailey said...

"Woman, you join me to my cave." he said with a rugged voice before adding hurridly, "Please, don't kick me in the nuts, I've been forced to say them words."

Ha! That cracked me up. Makes me sad I haven't read anything on here for awhile. Always loved your stories. :)