Hey everyone,
here's the final story of the first C&R round.
We're really sorry that it took us so long to finish it, but it's done now and we hope you'll like this one as much as you liked the other three stories.
Have fun and leave comments please! (Also on what you thought about this little project, something we could improve on our next round and things like that).
Cheers,
Noa&Steffi
STORY D OF CROSSROADS & ROUNDABOUTS - ROUND 1:
Title: LOVE OF MY LIFE
Authors: Monique, Bex, Steffi, Noa.
Genre: R,D,T
Rating: 16+
Pages: 32
Cast: you, four lifers, three friends
Teaser: They fell in love during a holiday in France, but lost contact... what happens when they meet again after so many years?
9 comments:
So,if no one of the 81 people who had a look on this story wants to leave a comment, I'll leave the first one, although it's a bit strange to comment a story you've written to 25%...
First, Noa, that's a really sweet prologue, and Monique and Bex, you definitely made something out of it.
I really like about the story that it's written in present tense, although it was quite hard to keep that in the writing-process (I always fell back in the past, oh, and Bex, you sometimes too, I tried to transfer it to the present, sorry if I made some mistakes (it's not that easy, I noticed that my grammar skills are very limited, haha))
And Monique, I hope you're not mad for the mop-thing :) And that we made a crazy pervert out of Thomas... It gets really scary at the end, Noa is my ultimate psycho/thriller-queen :)
Who's in for the next round?
I read on my phone last night but it's a pain to comment on it so thought I'd wait till I was on the PC.
Steffi...I struggle with tenses too so I was bound to slip up somewhere lol.
I noticed one Scripting error...I can't seem to find it now but the end of 'remark' had been scripted with the fave lifer.
I enjoyed reading the story as much as I enjoyed writing it, a very exciting ending too. Well done to us haha
It won't load for me!
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I'm afraid it was me opening the fic about 50 times of the 81 :p lol Was attempting to read it at my phone aswell but couldn't get it to work :p haha
So yeah, girrrls, I love you! You've done such a fabby job at the story <3 I totally adore it! Was so exciting to see the story finished after writing the first part. You've all done a great job!
Lovely! What an ending!
This is such a great story! Thanks a lot for writing & sharing :)
If I'm allowed to remark: There's two scripting things in the part where they're in the hospital. Two "Ki"s haven't been scripted. ;)
I enjoyed the story, the lunatic boyfriend was a nice twist and the ending was too cute! I also agree that the opening was adorable!
I did find it hard to read at points only because I used Kian as my favorite lifer and had Shane out surfing...so dampened it a bit for me, but we can't make everyone happy and we can't make a thousand questions for scripting...I still enjoyed it though :)
I like this sweet story, i just think that the crazy-boyfriend part made it a bit off (sorry :|) but generally its good!! :)
Great one again!!! I liked the turn in the end *creeeeepyyyy*
In between it got a little long but you really got me with that lunatic standing in the doorway!!!!
Great work, girls!!!!!!!
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