STORY A OF CROSSROADS & ROUNDABOUTS - ROUND 1:
Title: MEMORIES LOST - AND FOUND?
Authors: Bex, Noa, Monique, Steffi
Genre: R,D
Rating: 16+
Pages: 40
Cast: you, four lifers, three friends
Teaser: A lost memory.... what do you do when he doesn't remember that he's supposed to love you?
15 comments:
Loved it!! Dont know what else to say lol
i second beck_willis with this.. i love it too.. :D
I want to add that I love the way, steffi?, ended this. Rather than having the main lifer just wake up and regain all of his memories, they have to deal with him not getting the majority back and start over again with their relationship. I wouldn't have thought of that if I'd written the entire thing.
I loved this. I wish it was longer though. =) Gosh, I miss reading these things. - Raine (I hope you remember me, I'm one of your authors! lol.)
Great story girls, I could feel the pain of both the characters, I really like how near the end he came to her feeling all shy and guilty but wanted a chance with her and I have to agree with Bex that the ending was right.
Bex; I said the exact same thing after they send it for a script-check lol Just perfect right?!
Love this story and it has been so inspiring to be working on it with you girls. Whoop!
Can't wait for the next one now!! We should try and do this C&R at least once a year!
Love it! It's a beautiful story and really well written! :)
It makes you really feel for the characters, their emotions, the pain, the little joys and the happiness.
Keep up with the awesome work guys! Hope to hear more of these from you soon! :)
I really like this story, too! Bex, this idea was soo great, we really could make something out of it :)
And yes, the ending is from me, I thought it much more interesting what'll happen if he doesn't get all of his memories back :) I could have continued writing so much more, but we had to get it finished :)
I'm really looking forward now to your opinion on the other three great fics!
I'm looking forward to reading the other three lol
An amazing and well written fic, really loved it one of the best, good job you guys keep it up xxx
L O V E! oh the emotions!! great work ladies!!
Loved the ending :) what a great story and a good teamwork, guys!! ;)
Noa
P.S. Of course we remember you Raine! Keep writing and hopefully we will have another great story from you again one day :) as far as I remember your wrote "dreams", right? :)
what a great story! Great job girls! this made for some interesting reading for me I can really relate to it right now it made me take a step back and really think. Great job girls. :)
Love Love LOVE this.. Wonderful story
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